“If Errands Could Kill (Minivan Mom Mystery Series)” by Jim Bronyaur

"If Errands Could Kill (Minivan Mom Mystery Series)" by Jim Bronyaur

Publisher: Hundred to Home Publishing

Kindle price: $3.19


Lending on Kindle Prime: Free

Print List Price: $7.89

Reviews: Illiterate drivel: If the author had had his seven-year-old write this book it would not be surprising. The plot moves fast but to get to it you must wade through horribly illiterate prose. Nearly every page contains an annoying error – think “he could OF” done something or “consulting my CONSCIOUS.” Worse than Tom Swifties, it is full of adverbs that have no “ly” – “He did it perfect.” Some sentences are so oddly written you have to double back to figure them out. This was a free download on Kindle; not worth the $3.50 now asked for.

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